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True love is a crimson coat
That no one dares to wear.
It's talked about, and dreamed about,
But no one seems to care.
It stays locked in a wardrobe,
And seldom looked upon;
But no one dares to wear the coat
That only One has donned.

That One, they say, who wore the coat
Was often called a Son.
A son, by whom, the people say,
Victory o're death had won.
The coat had earned its color
By the blood that He had spilt.
But, died He not
How grass dies, or how roses wilt.

Who can match this sacrifice?
Who compare to this?
Can anyone amount to it
With just one simple kiss?
With just one hug, an "I love you";
An action, oh-so-trite.
Can any show a love that's true?
And don the coat, they might?
Thank you for reading. God bless.

2012 GoldenQuill7
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:iconwatertiger1419:
Watertiger1419 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
its very good.
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velikod Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
thank you! it is magnificent!
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QuantumInnovator Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
I certainly can't.

Excellent job.
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GoldenQuill7 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
I appreciate your comment. God bless you.
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Bickhamsarah Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it suppose to say "hug" instead of "with just one hung"?

Great poem.
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GoldenQuill7 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
I fixed the typo. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. God bless.
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Bickhamsarah Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D

Great job again on the poem.
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The rhythm trips a little at times, but I can see your meaning and belief crystal-clear. :) Nice!
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GoldenQuill7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Thank you for the comment, and for adding this to your Favorites as well. May God bless you.
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jadedwindwillow Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice!
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