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True love is a crimson coat
That no one dares to wear.
It's talked about, and dreamed about,
But no one seems to care.
It stays locked in a wardrobe,
And seldom looked upon;
But no one dares to wear the coat
That only One has donned.

That One, they say, who wore the coat
Was often called a Son.
A son, by whom, the people say,
Victory o're death had won.
The coat had earned its color
By the blood that He had spilt.
But, died He not
How grass dies, or how roses wilt.

Who can match this sacrifice?
Who compare to this?
Can anyone amount to it
With just one simple kiss?
With just one hug, an "I love you";
An action, oh-so-trite.
Can any show a love that's true?
And don the coat, they might?
Thank you for reading. God bless.

2012 GoldenQuill7
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Watertiger1419 Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
its very good.
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:iconvelikod:
thank you! it is magnificent!
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:iconquantuminnovator:
I certainly can't.

Excellent job.
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:icongoldenquill7:
I appreciate your comment. God bless you.
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:iconbickhamsarah:
Bickhamsarah Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it suppose to say "hug" instead of "with just one hung"?

Great poem.
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:icongoldenquill7:
I fixed the typo. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. God bless.
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:iconbickhamsarah:
Bickhamsarah Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D

Great job again on the poem.
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Golden-Leaves Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The rhythm trips a little at times, but I can see your meaning and belief crystal-clear. :) Nice!
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:icongoldenquill7:
Thank you for the comment, and for adding this to your Favorites as well. May God bless you.
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jadedwindwillow Feb 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice!
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